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哀伤的眼睛

雨中垂钓人
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Joined: 18 Jun 2007
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Posted: 2007-10-15 10:27:54 Post subject: 哀伤的眼睛

这是一双父亲的眼睛，没有泪水却饱含着哀伤。每个人都不敢直接面对，看到它泪水就充满眼眶。不知如何去安慰，这失子的痛苦他怎样抵挡。他仿佛在喃喃求助：谁能帮我把儿子留在病床？无声的泪更让人心痛，活着的人才知道惆怅。他面对无情和无奈，因为明天的路还更长。他必须让自己更加坚强，才能托起家庭的希望。

William Zhou周道模
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Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Location: 中国四川广汉
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Posted: 2007-10-15 14:40:23 Post subject:

情浓！但诗意地表达不够。作者不叙说，退出来，让“父亲”活动起来！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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