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睡吧，一块青春的石头

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hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-05 23:46:04 Post subject: 睡吧，一块青春的石头

再一次把你点开一丝半缕在没石化之前你是碳水的精妙配方是什么样的高温高压令你放出寂寞的晶光我们开始挖掘彼此的坟墓在挖通之前，我们的世界是黑暗的你说我的眼睛是启明星而我看见的只是一个凝固了的影子睡吧，一块青春的石头

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Posted: 2007-10-06 00:00:36 Post subject:

谁说你的"眼睛是启明星 "? _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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Posted: 2007-10-06 00:11:00 Post subject:

是JEMMY的那两个金丝雀眼睛给你的启示?

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-06 00:12:31 Post subject:

晕一晕我来写一个更晕的周末, 放松一下等着 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-06 00:17:45 Post subject:

寂寞开无主可以是花，也可以是女人但男人总是有主的被女人吆喝着简直就是一头牛耕田犁地一不小心，就被瞧扁啦整一陀牛屎招苍蝇碰到运气好的也插一插鲜花花开无人赏和女人没人疼一样那么大的一丘田地荒芜了多可惜又是谁的错 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-06 00:19:25 Post subject:

睡吧，一块青春的石头: 写的是钻石 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-06 00:19:50 Post subject:

他的意思是,我在大陆给关得久了,出去眼花 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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Posted: 2007-10-06 00:23:22 Post subject:

我们开始挖掘彼此的坟墓在挖通之前我们的世界是黑暗的精彩！总是期望从你诗里找到些出其不意的精彩处。羡慕这种创造力。天才就是能写出这种句子来的人。（晚上吃了大蒜，否则还能更甜些）把其他部分都去掉，从以上四句开始，可以写成一首令人难忘的世纪绝唱。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-10-06 00:34:21 Post subject:

nobody有火眼金睛~

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Posted: 2007-10-06 00:49:14 Post subject:

石头睡着了睡得好甜我想它曾经有雪亮的眼睛苍凉的世界它一定是看累了，看够了你瞧它睡得多死呀 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-06 00:51:34 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

寂寞开无主

可以是花，也可以是女人
但男人总是有主的
被女人吆喝着
简直就是一头牛
耕田犁地
一不小心，就被瞧扁啦
整一陀牛屎
招苍蝇
碰到运气好的
也插一插鲜花
花开无人赏
和女人没人疼一样
那么大的一丘田地
荒芜了多可惜
又是谁的错

Laughing

难道是岛的错?

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Posted: 2007-10-06 00:55:25 Post subject:

石头我担心它一醒来没人玩我抱着它一起进入梦乡这样一个简单的愿望都没实现过 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-06 01:00:54 Post subject:

不信,失实 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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Posted: 2007-10-06 01:02:44 Post subject:

黑与白我们开始挖掘彼此的坟墓在挖通之前我们的世界是黑暗的在挖通之后我们失去了黑白的世界 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-06 01:03:37 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

石头

我担心它一醒来
没人玩
我抱着它
一起进入梦乡
这样一个简单的愿望
都没实现过
Very Happy

你可以把你的石头丢在着，我们大家继续和他玩~ Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-10-06 01:03:55 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

石头

我担心它一醒来
没人玩
我抱着它
一起进入梦乡
这样一个简单的愿望
都没实现过
Very Happy

你可以把你的石头丢在这，我们大家继续和他玩~ Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-10-06 01:17:23 Post subject:

金丝雀麻雀的本家多一字当贵夫人换一字却困守一生 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-06 01:32:06 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

金丝雀

麻雀的本家
多一字
当贵夫人
换一字
却困守一生

这一首不错,有哲理~

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Posted: 2007-10-06 01:41:49 Post subject:

我们开始挖掘彼此的坟墓在挖通之前我们的世界是黑暗的憧憬着所有的光明即使坟墓也不再寒冷 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-06 01:52:59 Post subject:

sorry, 不好。怎么感觉从民主党一下就成共产党了，把那几句抄下来了，没事琢磨一下。撤了。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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