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始祖鸟
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PostPosted: 2007-10-16 20:39:47    Post subject: 始祖鸟 Reply with quote

始祖鸟(双语)
黄娟
我梦见始祖鸟在有幸的天空盘旋
历史上的第一只鸟
许是魔术
许是灵气之初
万物因它而深受鼓舞,欣欣向荣

考证不出它诞生在人类出现之前多少年
在上帝的工序中
它排在人类之先
亦或是为了陪伴人类丰富人类启示人类才后出现
但它肯定是在混沌之中诞生
一切简单而美好
除了偶尔闪电击起的森林大火
火山喷发的浓烟成为它的污染源

我歌颂历史上的第一只鸟
第一个拥有那样的视野
第一个感受新鲜与新鲜过后的不安,寂寞
但它绝对的非出现不可
因为,始祖鸟
第一个终究是光荣的
第一个
是它使人类喜悦
是它使人类知道还有这么一种生存模式
是它使人类想飞
或者说它的后裔

始祖鸟出现在地球的天空
多么优美、抒情的画面
值得大书特书记忆的时刻
如同自然的诗歌
造化的不可说
啼叫声
唱着自由的欢欣生命的美妙

(注:写此诗时不知始祖鸟命名来由,如果知道以后还可能出现更早的鸟,本来会是另外一种写法。)




The Archaeopteryx



I dream the archaeopteryx were wheeling in the good fortune air

The first bird in history

Maybe it's magic

Maybe it's begginning of anima

The Universe most inspired by it,and flourishing



Cann't textual research how many years it birthed before manking appeared

In God's process

It was ranged before mankind

Or appeared later for accompnying mankind,enriching mankind and enlightening mankind

But it sure was born in chaos

Everything simple and fine

Except occasionally lightning caused forest big fire

The thick smoke from volcanic eruption became it's polluting source



I extol the first bird in the history

The first one had that field of vision

The first one feeling fresh,and disturbed and lonely after strange

But it absollutly must appeared

Because,archaeoptryx

First one eventually is honour

First one

Is it let mankind happy

Is it let mankind know there is a live style like this

Is it,or it's descendant

Make mankind want to fly



Archaeopteryx appeared air above the globe

How beautiful and lyrics the picture

Worth thick and heavy in colours for it and remember the moment

Just like natural poems

The Creato cann't tell

The cry of archaeopteryx

Singing the happy of liberty and wonderful of life

[The poem was writern before finding Archaeopteryx is not the first]
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PostPosted: 2007-10-17 15:42:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

dream ---dreamed? manking ---- mankind?
It range ---- It was ranged? bornin---- born in ?
forst ---- forest ? Thick smoke ---- The thick smoke ?
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PostPosted: 2007-10-17 16:39:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢周生的细心,指正
dream我想用一般现在时也许还好,看各位看法
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PostPosted: 2007-10-17 23:16:04    Post subject: Reply with quote



a recreated model


other people Laughing

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PostPosted: 2007-10-18 00:03:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢博士的照片
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