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七绝 四首 :莲梅菊松
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 21:20:39    Post subject: 七绝 四首 :莲梅菊松 Reply with quote

文/梅影三叠


清新淡雅此情深,不染芳莲晓梦侵。
且伴濂溪长守候,存香留韵有知音。


冰霜掩盖清心在,粉面凝妆彻骨凉。
踏雪寻梅香满路,漫裁锦句饰春芳。


秋来飒飒冷风狂,篱畔田间草已黄。
宁愿抱香枝上老,案前书卷有余香。


壮志凌云入九天,俊拔苍郁自岿然。
凭高漫看众山小,石上崖间此貌妍。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-15 21:24:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

莲梅菊松
做到了言志,说出想说的话
不错
古诗词,也是需要个性化的
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PostPosted: 2007-04-16 08:03:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢《松》,更喜欢“凭高漫看众山小”的不凡气度。Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-04-23 22:53:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的诗,有独到之处!!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 20:41:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
莲梅菊松
做到了言志,说出想说的话
不错
古诗词,也是需要个性化的
Very Happy


感谢和平岛兄
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 20:42:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
喜欢《松》,更喜欢“凭高漫看众山小”的不凡气度。Laughing


冰清大姐好!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 20:43:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
不错的诗,有独到之处!!

问好海军朋友
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PostPosted: 2007-05-27 00:08:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

哪个都喜欢哎.
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PostPosted: 2007-05-27 06:18:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

以物言志, 言之有物
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PostPosted: 2007-07-24 01:55:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好暗香,白水:)
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PostPosted: 2007-07-24 05:24:49    Post subject: Re: 七绝 四首 :莲梅菊松 Reply with quote

和梅影三叠《莲》

黎明扑粉自春深,妖冶维曦暗地侵。
行色匆匆风任过,夜阑无语可知音?




嶙峋到老风犹在,一树英华骨岂凉!
细看那年风雪夜,何能觅得更芬芳!


秋风此夜任恣狂,我本天生一片黄。
休道千山满落叶,纷纷叶落我飞香。

未觉倾身上九天,听风沐雨在悠然。
匆匆浏览秋光里,满目无暇处处妍。

下面是梅影原诗:

清新淡雅此情深,不染芳莲晓梦侵。
且伴濂溪长守候,存香留韵有知音。


冰霜掩盖清心在,粉面凝妆彻骨凉。
踏雪寻梅香满路,漫裁锦句饰春芳。


秋来飒飒冷风狂,篱畔田间草已黄。
宁愿抱香枝上老,案前书卷有余香。


壮志凌云入九天,俊拔苍郁自岿然。
凭高漫看众山小,石上崖间此貌妍。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 20:22:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

这文集蛮漂亮的呢
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