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我的学生武玉戎的诗《假如我是一片绿叶》

陈若祥
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Posted: 2007-09-21 05:25:16 Post subject: 我的学生武玉戎的诗《假如我是一片绿叶》

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Posted: 2007-09-21 05:50:16 Post subject:

真是个好老师

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Posted: 2007-09-21 05:58:45 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight美言了！我自己写不出，就去指导学生写了。他们的诗有的真不错，情不自禁地就想发上来与大家分享。同时，也期望大伙批评指导，一起探讨。 _________________ ¤当树的叶子再次泛绿，繁华 ¤我们欣赏着一部与你我无关的电影 ¤看着春天悄悄地走来 ¤看着春天延伸在我们的脚下 ◆安徽凤鸣诗社◆http://blog.sina.com.cn/fmshishe

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Posted: 2007-09-21 15:05:39 Post subject:

评论学生作品要看他她的年龄。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2007-09-21 18:04:00 Post subject:

好久不见祥子诗人了，甚是想念你，想念你的诗！！祝好 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-09-21 18:05:05 Post subject:

叫他们自己上来这里交流吧！！这样对他们的成长更有帮助！！

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Posted: 2007-09-21 21:08:19 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

好久不见祥子诗人了，甚是想念你，想念你的诗！！祝好

中秋快乐，海军兄！
我可一直在关注着论坛，只不过自己没有诗作，无颜见大伙．
以后一定努力去写诗．

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Posted: 2007-09-21 21:11:38 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

叫他们自己上来这里交流吧！！这样对他们的成长更有帮助！！

高中的孩子哪有时间上网啊，我所发的都是经他们同意的．
他们也想听听各位大家的意见．

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Posted: 2007-09-22 03:08:21 Post subject:

向传播诗歌的老师敬礼！！！诗也好。。比这里的一些还行；）。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-09-24 19:34:24 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

向传播诗歌的老师敬礼！！！

Cool

诗也好。。比这里的一些还行；）

。

谢谢你的鼓励，促进诗歌的发展是我们共同的义务．

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Posted: 2007-09-25 01:20:45 Post subject:

邓他们考试完　带他们来玩玩哟。。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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