弹剑作歌 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 68
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Posted: 2007-09-13 22:10:45 Post subject: 闲 居 |
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雨后堂前数落红,日斜墙下守西风。
壶中未剩青梅酒,镜里何来白发翁。
半部春秋翻到老,一身肝胆磨成空。
无关李杜疏狂气,犹问离骚工不工。 |
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戴玨 秀才

Joined: 03 Jan 2007 Posts: 808
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Posted: 2007-09-14 14:02:01 Post subject: |
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離騷雖寫的好,也未能完全抒發失意的心情。 _________________ I labour by singing light
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-14 17:23:11 Post subject: |
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意蕴深浓。 |
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征尘载袖 秀才

Joined: 18 Aug 2007 Posts: 527 Location: 臭豆腐作坊 征尘载袖Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-16 04:31:32 Post subject: |
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可怜秋雨欲枫红,却为啼号扑恶风。刻烛漫题望江怨,挥毫独与卖油翁。
飞觞唤出想非想,趁月吟来空复空。只怕当时都写尽,故而容力取谁工。
^_^ _________________
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弹剑作歌 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 68
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Posted: 2007-09-18 21:43:47 Post subject: |
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征尘载袖 wrote: |
可怜秋雨欲枫红,却为啼号扑恶风。刻烛漫题望江怨,挥毫独与卖油翁。
飞觞唤出想非想,趁月吟来空复空。只怕当时都写尽,故而容力取谁工。
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感谢光临!
许久不见雪里那个红,是失踪了? |
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弹剑作歌 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 68
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Posted: 2007-09-18 21:46:21 Post subject: |
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也不提点意见? |
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征尘载袖 秀才

Joined: 18 Aug 2007 Posts: 527 Location: 臭豆腐作坊 征尘载袖Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-19 03:13:44 Post subject: |
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她上学去了^_^ _________________
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