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齐白石的“虾趣”
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PostPosted: 2006-12-03 23:16:56    Post subject: 齐白石的“虾趣” Reply with quote

齐白石的“ 虾趣 ”

—— 司马策风


三十才学画的木匠
却毫无工匠的拘谨
静观那断续飞涌的刨花
你顿悟了色与空的佛性

笔浓时 乌云翻滚
那里可藏有电闪雷鸣
锋淡处 少女含羞
你说 是梦还是醒

墨断后 能看见空白
情人藕断丝连的眼神
连绵时 可嗅到飞白
飘逸出醉态朦胧的空灵

群虾 是欢戏在水里
还是在天空中飞行
是虾透明还是水更透明
你的水墨有神行无迹的风韵

你人生的脚印
岂不就是另一幅水墨丹青
在浓时 就是断
在灭处 就是生


2006,(4,26—11,22)
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PostPosted: 2006-12-04 03:34:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

在 浓 时 , 就 是 断

在 灭 处 , 就 是 生


有禅意,学习~
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PostPosted: 2006-12-04 05:02:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

你 人 生 的 脚 印 啊

岂 不 就 是 另 一 幅 水 墨 丹 青

在 浓 时 , 就 是 断

在 灭 处 , 就 是 生

静谧的美!
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PostPosted: 2006-12-05 17:48:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

司马的诗歌也有了禅意
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PostPosted: 2006-12-06 05:11:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

拥抱司马。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-06 08:45:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好司马。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-07 03:38:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

人生中‘虾趣’多多益善。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-07 21:08:17    Post subject: ! Reply with quote

啊也!司马厉害!!齐白石不过是画虾,司马把齐白石都给画啦!!!

……玩笑哈,喜欢你这个诗,挺到位的!顶啦

:)
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PostPosted: 2006-12-17 23:39:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢半溪明月点评

远握
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PostPosted: 2006-12-17 23:43:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

再学习一便
经典著作
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PostPosted: 2006-12-18 22:36:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

北方狼的拥抱——谁敢消受:血盆大张,眼冒绿光。

多谢你的深情
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PostPosted: 2006-12-18 22:38:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好维鹿延。先送上一个免费礼物——圣诞快乐。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-18 22:40:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好左岸。你的诗歌的“虾趣”不比齐白石的“虾趣”少多少啊。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-18 22:46:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢你——得到美女诗人的赞扬,那是要添阳寿的哟。

北方狼的拥抱不敢消受,那就消受美女的拥抱吧——这之前,可能要先送一束

鲜花吧——权当获得消魂拥抱的入场券。

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PostPosted: 2007-09-06 22:16:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

小动两字。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-12 20:15:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

提读,请阅评
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