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萤火虫飞过秸秆的头顶

戴永良
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Joined: 28 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2007-09-08 04:35:32 Post subject: 萤火虫飞过秸秆的头顶

萤火虫飞过秸秆的头顶灰暗的灯光拉长长长的身影蟋蟀的鸣叫，引来萤火虫飞过秸秆的头顶一颗流星，箭一般射入心脏狼在山上痛哭失声睡觉变得亳无意义寒霜刚爬上草叶排卵一条流浪很久的野狗衔着遗弃的裤头遛遛达达地跑来抖落身上陈旧的泥垢赤裸地器具和赤裸的身体走下画框赤裸地进行交媾然后又满足地小溺一只破碎的土缶留下一片殷红的血迹晚秋咬着嘴唇唏嘘一条露滴掉下床来猥琐地靠在墙角窗口露出鱼肚的白皙装满惶恐的发髻倾斜着一步一步走了出去 _________________ 真诚友爱善良

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2007-09-08 07:15:03 Post subject:

感觉似晦涩了点. 问好朋友

韩少君
进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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Posted: 2007-09-08 07:51:22 Post subject:

象达利的画-------- 象征某种欲望. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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Posted: 2007-09-10 04:36:57 Post subject:

意识的流动。整体感觉不是很清晰，但个别的细节很有趣。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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