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心有莲灯

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-07 07:36:36 Post subject: 心有莲灯

心有莲灯　　／半溪明月手捧莲灯的女人用莲的气质，水的忧郁挣脱一截藕从碧波荡漾的湖心爬上岸。垂柳拨云夜幕，青鸟归巢一盏心灯，跪于佛前照亮前尘后世莲的翅膀，举起万缕金光木鱼声声，敲开一扇迟开的门 2007-9-7

山城子
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Posted: 2007-09-07 07:56:28 Post subject:

手捧莲灯的女人有莲的气质，水的忧郁挣脱一截藕从碧波荡漾的湖心爬上岸。垂柳拨云覆雨 ——好美呀！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

nobody
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Posted: 2007-09-07 14:41:42 Post subject:

挣脱一截藕莲的翅膀形象！ _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-07 15:51:05 Post subject:

好美啊

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-09-07 15:55:16 Post subject:

心有莲灯，好！！！我什么时候心里会有莲灯呢？问候可爱的诗人！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-08 06:45:34 Post subject:

问候山城子老师、ＮＯＢＯＤＹ、白水、海军等诗人～

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-08 07:01:29 Post subject:

半溪可清心明月有佛缘万万不可出家哦.那样,尘世间就又少了个有才的美女了-------- 想想该有多遗憾! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-08 07:05:06 Post subject:

垂柳拨云把覆雨去掉信我话没错! 真是好诗! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

赵雅君
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Posted: 2007-09-08 07:08:18 Post subject:

飘逸、超脱的意境，欣赏！

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-08 07:30:39 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

半溪可清心
明月有佛缘

万万不可出家哦.那样,尘世间就又少了个有才的美女了--------

想想该有多遗憾!

我好好的，为什么要出家，不过是有个姐妹信佛，一直说我有佛缘。她说的一切我也不是很信，但她说我现在不信，老了肯定会信的。她对我很好，我们买了车子，她就帮我们找她的在庙里的师傅请香囊。还帮我请了个转戒，以保佑平安。这次，又为我请了个天珠。写诗歌和我本人的生活没有关系，让少君担心了，我觉得生活很美好，上天也很惠顾我。照这样说来，我还是应该感谢上苍，是不是还是该信佛呢？呵呵，为了少君不遗憾，明月就是想出家，也不出了哈～ Very Happy

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-08 07:33:00 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

垂柳拨云

把覆雨去掉

信我话没错!

真是好诗!

那就信你，我对这个覆于雨也疑虑过～这就改过！ Very Happy

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-08 21:37:10 Post subject:

出家出嫁假出家家家家家出嫁出家真出嫁嫁嫁嫁嫁哈哈哈哈 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-08 22:24:42 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

出家出嫁假出家家家家家
出嫁出家真出嫁嫁嫁嫁嫁

哈哈哈哈

rose

呵呵，我只在佛门前探探头，并没打算进去～还是外面好玩些！ Very Happy

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-11 06:43:22 Post subject:

月月：　　＜＜名月＞＞挖空心思想一个名字我不想或不敢喜欢她名月在我的书包里成了哥哥的口头禅名月，在放学的路上扑棱棱地吓我一跳我多么想把名月　想成未出嫁路上的姑娘可是未出嫁的姑娘只有姐姐她　天天骂名月 _________________ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-11 07:08:22 Post subject:

武女士相信我.把你的QQ号告诉我.我想请教些电脑方面的知识.我的QQ 号 767292743 ,加我啊! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-11 07:20:52 Post subject:

我已经加了你了，只是你还没回过来～我的号码：１２３５０７２５９

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2007-09-11 08:54:58 Post subject:

可见佛心如皈机遇到，顺应皈依将是上上大好。但是等待中，我们也喜悦于明月的心有莲灯祝福：）

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-11 09:06:51 Post subject:

七小姐 wrote:

可见佛心如皈

机遇到，顺应皈依将是上上大好。但是等待中，我们也喜悦于明月的心有莲灯

祝福：）

对于佛，我只是用三尺头上有神明来约束自己，并没有真的相信有佛，也无所谓皈依，等年老我想也不会皈依吧，我相信科学，问好七小姐！ Very Happy

杨光
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Posted: 2007-09-11 18:07:16 Post subject:

诗情画意的心有莲灯,欣赏 _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

nobody
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Posted: 2007-09-11 18:29:19 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

七小姐 wrote:

可见佛心如皈

机遇到，顺应皈依将是上上大好。但是等待中，我们也喜悦于明月的心有莲灯

祝福：）

对于佛，我只是用三尺头上有神明来约束自己，并没有真的相信有佛，也无所谓皈依，等年老我想也不会皈依吧，我相信科学，问好七小姐！ Very Happy

明月啊，“我相信科学” 听起来真的好幼稚哩。一时半时也说不清楚，多看多想吧。这本身对人生很重要。即使是只考虑诗，也是有个深度问题呢！
当然，我否定这句话，并不是肯定你所否定的。 Very Happy

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