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五绝－秋
莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 17:41:22    Post subject: 五绝－秋 Reply with quote
　　
晨风盈素袖，信步伴秋蝉
欲送华装叶，魂归故土眠
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 17:47:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
更喜欢"晨风盈素袖，信步伴秋蝉"
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 18:31:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
结句十分悲清!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 19:05:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
更喜欢"晨风盈素袖，信步伴秋蝉"
昨天晨起出去逛街偶得了这两句 Razz 谢谢JJ！问好JJ
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 19:09:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
白云闲人 wrote:
结句十分悲清!
“魂归故土眠”也不能算‘悲清’吧？看如何理解喽 Razz
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晓松
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 21:27:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
莹雪 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
更喜欢"晨风盈素袖，信步伴秋蝉"
昨天晨起出去逛街偶得了这两句 Razz 谢谢JJ！问好JJ


有什么秘诀传授一下，我出去逛街咋没有诗句偶得呢？ want to smile
欣赏~
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 23:05:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
晓松 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
更喜欢"晨风盈素袖，信步伴秋蝉"
昨天晨起出去逛街偶得了这两句 Razz 谢谢JJ！问好JJ


有什么秘诀传授一下，我出去逛街咋没有诗句偶得呢？ want to smile
欣赏~
秘诀吧，不好说哦 tongue face我想应该是只可意会 thinking 不可言传 shhhh 嘻嘻，晓松兄明白了吗 sticking tongue
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