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凌晨随笔

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Posted: 2007-09-06 15:26:00 Post subject: 凌晨随笔

(女儿上中学了,每天早晨都要早起,我们的生物钟从此改变!) 《失眠札记》 2007-08-31 06:09:46 季节淡远。一些人一些事，不可避免沉入，记忆的深潭抖开走过的日子我的双手，并无遮挽可留只是，这个起于子夜的晨我总得记下点什么比如,昨夜街市的喧闹我身影的茕茕再比如,凌晨西南的月亮有些微亏缺,还长了毛至于“数绵羊”的时刻不记也罢，漆黑一片《替罪羊》 2007-09-07 05:54:29 你说,你讨厌那乐曲每天凌晨,它都掠夺了你的睡眠宝贝,其实它啊是妈妈的替罪羊但是,妈妈又是谁的替罪羊

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Posted: 2007-09-06 18:38:55 Post subject:

写诗歌的日子 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-09-07 16:06:30 Post subject:

荷梦真是个好妈妈. 感人之作. 问好诗人

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Posted: 2007-09-08 04:36:12 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

写诗歌的日子

谢谢岛主!其实,这不是同一天写的.好久才憋出这两个 Embarassed

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Posted: 2007-09-08 04:41:57 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

荷梦真是个好妈妈. 感人之作. 问好诗人

惭愧.荷梦是一个不能免俗的妈妈,我没有勇气还孩子本属于她的睡眠.

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Posted: 2007-09-08 07:38:34 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

荷梦真是个好妈妈. 感人之作. 问好诗人

同感!

再比如,凌晨西南的月亮
有些微亏缺,还长了毛

好句子------有才气
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Posted: 2007-09-08 07:51:33 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

荷梦真是个好妈妈. 感人之作. 问好诗人

惭愧.荷梦是一个不能免俗的妈妈,我没有勇气还孩子本属于她的睡眠.

没有勇气?WHY?

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Posted: 2007-09-08 09:05:01 Post subject:

再比如,凌晨西南的月亮有些微亏缺,还长了毛这个句子有想象～问好荷梦！

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Posted: 2007-09-09 19:47:03 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

荷梦真是个好妈妈. 感人之作. 问好诗人

同感!

再比如,凌晨西南的月亮
有些微亏缺,还长了毛

好句子------有才气

谢谢！

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Posted: 2007-09-09 19:54:30 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

荷梦 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

荷梦真是个好妈妈. 感人之作. 问好诗人

惭愧.荷梦是一个不能免俗的妈妈,我没有勇气还孩子本属于她的睡眠.

没有勇气?WHY?

——是啊，作为母亲，孩子的身心健康应该是最重要的，可是每天凌晨五点钟，她就得睁开惺惺睡眼赶到学校学习，我不能反对不说，反而天天督促她准时起床。《替罪羊》一诗谈的便是这个。

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Posted: 2007-09-09 19:56:12 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

再比如,凌晨西南的月亮
有些微亏缺,还长了毛

这个句子有想象～问好荷梦！

谢谢明月，其实很写实的。不信，你明年七月十九凌晨到外面看看。呵呵！

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Posted: 2007-09-10 04:57:48 Post subject:

生活中的诗歌 _________________ 里面有点自己的东西 http://blog.sina.com.cn/sashizi

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Posted: 2007-09-10 14:05:58 Post subject:

仨石子 wrote:

生活中的诗歌

谢谢仨石子！生活不因诗歌而存在，但诗歌却因生活而存在。

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Posted: 2007-09-11 14:24:21 Post subject:

支持：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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