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《一个声音很大》

新华
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Joined: 29 Jul 2007
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Posted: 2007-09-06 16:43:26 Post subject: 《一个声音很大》

《一个声音很大》新华一个声音很大她发自一座很高的大楼大楼和她一同长大我也和她一同长大过去时常有人欺侮我现在只是有人想欺侮我我尝过被人欺侮的滋味我谁都不想欺侮不管他以前是否欺侮过我不管他是否比我小让我们沐浴日出一同长大 2007年9月7日星期五

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2007-09-07 04:52:12 Post subject:

应注意诗歌质的东西.问好! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-07 15:57:31 Post subject:

新华, 能感觉到你童年的回忆. 但文笔觉得单薄了些. 己见, 不妥见谅或许你是想让诗歌一起回到过去

nobody
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Posted: 2007-09-07 16:16:23 Post subject:

不过，有种单纯可爱在里头。而且内容很正面。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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