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				|  发表于: 2007-08-23 17:31:41    发表主题: PM |   |  
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				| This may not be regarded as a poem for it is just out of an impulse when I received a personal message from Nia, a Turkish poet friend who I miss very much. So I penned it down without much refinement. 
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 If it were not for that wake-up call
 She would’ve been still in hibernation
 For how long
 She really does not know
 If it were not for that wake-up call
 She would've been still wandering around
 For how far
 She really does not know
 
 But that personal message
 Such a sweet, tender reminder
 Popping up “how have you been?”
 Lights up a gloomy day
 Electrifies her still heart
 A lone bird trailed behind
 Now goes “flap, flap, flap”
 Over tree tops, up again
 Into the bosom of the sky
 
 
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				|  发表于: 2007-09-06 14:04:09    发表主题: |   |  
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 A very touching recital poem - well done
   
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				|  发表于: 2007-09-06 17:43:52    发表主题: |   |  
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				| Your comment 'recital' sounds negative to me, and 'well done' , equivalent to 拜读。  _________________
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				|  发表于: 2007-09-20 12:36:15    发表主题: |   |  
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				| you think too much   
 paranoia  ??
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