淡水
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 Posted: 2007-09-03 14:16:51 Post subject: 吃喝嫖赌 |
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吃
胖了
摸不到心跳
喝
下坠的肚皮
淹没了阴囊的模样
嫖
小姐要笑
不得不张口
赌
虎口没牙
有个无底洞
2007，8，29 |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-09-03 14:41:51 Post subject: |
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形象
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白水
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Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-09-03 18:51:57 Post subject: |
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恕我直言, 诗味淡了些 
逃跑了  |
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kokho
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| Posted: 2007-09-03 23:24:20 Post subject: |
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厉害 ：）
。。
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淡水
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| Posted: 2007-09-04 05:02:09 Post subject: |
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谢岛主阅评。 |
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淡水
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| Posted: 2007-09-04 05:03:43 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
恕我直言, 诗味淡了些
逃跑了 |
谢白水。
不会吓到吧。  |
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淡水
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| Posted: 2007-09-04 05:04:47 Post subject: |
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多谢kokho。
不敢当，不敢当。 |
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nobody
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| Posted: 2007-09-04 06:03:30 Post subject: |
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很好的思考。
第一个不错。
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淡水
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| Posted: 2007-09-05 15:04:05 Post subject: |
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| nobody wrote: |
很好的思考。
第一个不错。 |
多谢nobody阅评。 |
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