老山 秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 319
老山Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-03 18:13:09 Post subject: 秋实 |
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秋实
(新韵)
秋风白露小阳春,
稻浪梨涛遍地金。
收刈归来天色晚,
无须沽酒酒盈樽。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-03 19:16:04 Post subject: |
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充满收获的喜庆。 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-03 20:09:34 Post subject: |
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结句更喜庆! |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-04 19:35:44 Post subject: |
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老山兄: 稻浪,梨涛,遍地金,酒盈樽... 构成一幅喜庆秋收的欢乐画卷!
学习了! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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