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伤 怀
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 04:44:28    Post subject: 伤 怀 Reply with quote

伤 怀

被痛苦辐射的苦痛
象挥之不去的阴霾
令我窒息
花草在无助中枯萎
声音戛然而止

我的灵魂带着惶恐爬出窗棂
在太阳下翻转、窘立
然后意郁怅怅
悄悄回归躯体
坐在桌旁
咀嚼意志
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 05:14:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

本性木呐一身轻
食色真也任君评



不与闲人争长短
自足是福万念空 water mellon
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 08:22:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

窒息
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 15:12:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

清纯。再写得虚一些就好了。问好!!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-31 04:05:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

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