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咏 樱 桃
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 23:07:07    Post subject: 咏 樱 桃 Reply with quote

咏 樱 桃

——司马策风


是少女的唇

还是她的心

你若诱捕了她的唇

心,就坠如你深井


樱桃甜不甜

心跳乱纷纷

是否想要摘一颗

扪心先自问



2007,1,5
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 23:21:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

心,就坠如你深井

爱情的力量呀
Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 23:25:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢岛主阅评

近来较忙,今日来,又多了好多新朋友了——很开心

欢迎欢迎
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 23:26:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

有点像词就感觉!读着上口!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 23:36:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

子花 wrote:
有点像词就感觉!读着上口!


感谢子花西欧能否阅评。

这首诗歌,的确有民歌和词的味道。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 23:42:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

司马策风 wrote:
感谢岛主阅评

近来较忙,今日来,又多了好多新朋友了——很开心

欢迎欢迎


看来是司马兄是大展宏图了,可喜可贺
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 23:46:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
司马策风 wrote:
感谢岛主阅评

近来较忙,今日来,又多了好多新朋友了——很开心

欢迎欢迎


看来是司马兄是大展宏图了,可喜可贺

Very Happy



爱好,就如同吸鸦片,或者小孩吃奶,那里戒得了啊

岛主 近来可好?


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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 23:46:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

流畅.
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 23:48:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
流畅.


谢赵兄阅评。久不见,问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-23 04:50:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

甜美的小樱桃 Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 23:46:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢 白水阅读。

小改一提
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 01:23:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

有爱好
无爱不好 Laughing

(好于你念三声,我念四声)
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 14:06:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

是否想要摘一颗

扪心先自问

莫使金樽空对月! blue moon
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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 21:22:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
有爱好
无爱不好 Laughing

(好于你念三声,我念四声)



博弈兄的点评富有蹊跷别有洞天。感谢!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 21:31:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
是否想要摘一颗

扪心先自问

莫使金樽空对月! blue moon


你的建议有道理。干杯!
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