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螳螂.野兔.蛇及其他 6首
郭野曦
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Joined: 07 Sep 2007
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Location: 中国:吉林
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 01:48:19    Post subject: 螳螂.野兔.蛇及其他 6首 Reply with quote

● 螳 螂

砍掉蝴蝶的一只翅膀
这个愿望由来已久
脖子比腿
还长的螳螂
丑得只剩下
对美的仇恨
受伤的蝴蝶飞走了
举着砍刀的螳螂
仍站在花蕊上
东张西望


● 夜来香

分开一地如水的月光
悄然绽放
一生为情所困的夜来香
风情万种的尤物
颤动的花瓣
撩起月亮的草裙
逼退一帘如水的月光
让剔亮暗夜的一瓣灯花
在月亮的缺口上
打开飞翔的翅膀


● 雪 人

雪人流泪了
冬天。只剩下一条雪狐的尾巴
在风中摇晃
雪人的一只脚,已踏进春天
雪仍在飘落


● 野 兔

落雪的冬天
杀机四伏
一个锈迹斑斑的铁丝套子
为野兔的生命
画上一个圆圆的句号
野兔事先并不知道
一把滴血的尖刀
在肉案上
等待多时


● 蛇

像抽在脚背上一道淤血的鞭痕
从废墟里爬出的蛇

令明亮的春天
起了一身鸡皮疙瘩


● 无法投寄的月光

信封装不下的雨声
打在稿纸上
让湿漉漉的词句丧失了
平平仄仄的韵律
雨停了
乌云散去
邮政编码的六个窗口里
灌满了雨水
一地泥泞的月光
如何投寄
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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Location: 吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 04:56:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

● 无法投寄的月光

信封装不下的雨声
打在稿纸上
让湿漉漉的词句丧失了
平平仄仄的韵律
雨停了
乌云散去
邮政编码的六个窗口里
灌满了雨水
一地泥泞的月光
如何投寄

问候野曦.比较欣赏这首.
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白水
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Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 18:29:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

好文笔. 自如的运用借喻, 去揭示人性的善恶.
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郭野曦
童生


Joined: 07 Sep 2007
Posts: 29
Location: 中国:吉林
郭野曦Collection
PostPosted: 2007-09-08 00:32:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
● 无法投寄的月光

信封装不下的雨声
打在稿纸上
让湿漉漉的词句丧失了
平平仄仄的韵律
雨停了
乌云散去
邮政编码的六个窗口里
灌满了雨水
一地泥泞的月光
如何投寄

问候野曦.比较欣赏这首.


见过韩少君诗友,听朋友说有这个坛子,帖点稿,助兴!
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郭野曦
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PostPosted: 2007-09-08 00:35:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
好文笔. 自如的运用借喻, 去揭示人性的善恶.


问候白水版主,新来的,请多多关照!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-08 07:07:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

构思机巧,诗质纯正,很具内涵,学习:)
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郭野曦
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 03:21:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

初来乍到,便感觉到“北美枫”的温馨、怡人!
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