wenshan
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Joined: 29 Jul 2007
Posts: 112
Location: Canada
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◇秋吟◇
一天萧瑟柳风摇，
倥偬行云万里飘。
长向吟边留雁影，
高山流水梦萦缭。
（加拿大/闻山）
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-08-26 17:08:16 Post subject: |
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| 天高云淡令人神清气朗。 |
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-08-26 19:04:22 Post subject: |
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高山流水梦萦缭。
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2007-08-26 20:07:35 Post subject: |
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| 高山流水心相通。问好！ |
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征尘载袖
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Joined: 18 Aug 2007
Posts: 527
Location: 臭豆腐作坊
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| Posted: 2007-08-27 06:44:20 Post subject: |
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闻山意致二郎摇，水遏林声百叶飘。
分付横枝惊散雀，呼风唤雨指尖缭。
^_^
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wenshan
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| Posted: 2007-08-27 11:59:32 Post subject: |
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谢谢莹雪、白水、冰清点评。并谢征尘载袖和诗。向大家问好！
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wenshan
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| Posted: 2007-08-28 04:28:19 Post subject: 赠征尘载袖 |
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征航诗海泛吟游，
尘界交心天下俦。
载雅光风高洁处，
袖香霁月不言愁。
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征尘载袖
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Joined: 18 Aug 2007
Posts: 527
Location: 臭豆腐作坊
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| Posted: 2007-08-28 05:35:47 Post subject: |
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闻人静锁半园游，山柳呼莺待蓄俦。
居叹素弦铸些泪，士流随墨几多愁。
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