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城市系列之八:在城市的密缝中看不到远方
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PostPosted: 2007-08-17 16:40:36    Post subject: 城市系列之八:在城市的密缝中看不到远方 Reply with quote

城市系列之八:

在城市的密缝中看不到远方

神经封闭在城市的骨骼里
不见了鸟的翅膀轻松地飞翔
海绵回沟繁殖僵硬的思想
珠幕绣帘暗藏着污垢
温文尔雅暗使着伎俩
铜钱跌落的眼球
百无禁忌做着各种交易
酒色靡靡中权柄乱舞

命运夹进签证
是否能摆脱围城的阻击
曾经的卡拉扬挥舞着音符
围困在钢筋混凝土搅拌音响
最深的柔情
能否倾听灵魂的回响
最大的沉默
能否惊醒泯灭人性的良知

孤单的身影江上的白帆
孤寂的心托付给江鹭
双手高举着浓缩的智慧
找不到存放的容器
背靠着树低吟浅唱

在城市的密缝中
看不到远方

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PostPosted: 2007-08-17 18:28:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

神经封闭在城市的骨骼里
不见了鸟的翅膀轻松地飞翔
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PostPosted: 2007-08-17 21:54:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

在城市的密缝中
看不到远方
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PostPosted: 2007-08-19 15:22:03    Post subject: 问好各位诗友! Reply with quote

问好各位诗友!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-19 18:04:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

写的有力!!大手笔!问候东兵诗人!!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-24 19:00:17    Post subject: 问好诗友! Reply with quote

问好诗友!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-24 23:29:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏学习,问好时老师~
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PostPosted: 2007-08-24 23:55:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的都市诗歌
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PostPosted: 2007-08-25 10:32:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

在城市的密缝中
看不到远方

欣赏,有这两句就足够了。呵呵
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