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钗头凤；七绝（二十首）；五绝；鹧鸪天；诉衷情；临江仙；醉花间；七律；浣溪沙^_^

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Posted: 2007-08-25 05:58:45 Post subject: 钗头凤；七绝（二十首）；五绝；鹧鸪天；诉衷情；临江仙；醉花间；七律；浣溪沙^_^

钗头凤青丝密，朱唇疾，俐牙伶舌娇喉力。吟纳牖，咏牵柳，隐艳幽香，问新询旧。某，某，某。盈虚挹，圆亏息，玉卮交劝青衫泣。徘徊久，觉焦朽，取蕊收花，送愁渊薮。逗，逗，逗。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-08-25 07:46:26 Post subject:

青丝密，朱唇疾，舌伶牙俐喉娇力。袖袖好酷, 什么都能入词.

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Posted: 2007-08-25 16:24:42 Post subject:

以往欣赏此牌都是凄切哀婉之调，今天却是如此活泼轻巧。

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Posted: 2007-08-25 18:46:49 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

青丝密，朱唇疾，舌伶牙俐喉娇力。

袖袖好酷, 什么都能入词. Laughing

姐姐，我把舌伶牙俐喉娇力改成俐牙伶舌娇喉力了^_^
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Posted: 2007-08-25 18:59:05 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

以往欣赏此牌都是凄切哀婉之调，今天却是如此活泼轻巧。

我熟悉熟悉词牌，等哪天心烦了再写凄切哀婉的哈^_^
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Posted: 2007-08-25 19:14:42 Post subject:

千万别心情不好，愿你天天快乐！

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Posted: 2007-08-26 19:11:10 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

青丝密，朱唇疾，舌伶牙俐喉娇力。

袖袖好酷, 什么都能入词. Laughing

姐姐，我把舌伶牙俐喉娇力改成俐牙伶舌娇喉力了^_^

MM, JJ这两日懒了一下, 真没见你的帖. 这一改,又当何说 Confused

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Posted: 2007-08-28 03:10:48 Post subject:

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千万别心情不好，愿你天天快乐！ Wink

谢谢！放心，我不会有苦说出来的^_^
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Posted: 2007-08-28 03:12:08 Post subject:

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MM, JJ这两日懒了一下, 真没见你的帖. 这一改,又当何说 Confused

姐姐，这样改，我自己读起来顺口^_^
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Posted: 2007-08-28 03:13:01 Post subject:

七绝一夜销香未暗灯，故人何在问神明。晚年当享身心健，莫使哀思翳爽晴。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-08-28 19:05:28 Post subject:

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征尘载袖,诗词双修,风彩娟秀,意景并茂!

. . 风彩 . .
<五绝>

曲曲凤凰台 ,
吹箫古韵来 ,
新音多色彩 ,
聪颖展奇才 .

五绝

吹歌载酒台，翻舞袖香来。
长被征吟苦，只因尘土才。

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Posted: 2007-08-29 03:13:16 Post subject:

七绝运枝勾叶见幽篁，可向高风借一狂。锋转丹田应有识，湘妃漉泪与清霜。 _________________

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七绝藤蔓依篱欲试高，破香隆粉沁云霄。莫如心稳瓜甜硕，宴谢媒根日夜浇。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-08-29 17:50:01 Post subject:

MM, 真羡慕幕你好快手. 我刚才还和秋香通电话, 说有漂亮MM等她

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Posted: 2007-08-30 02:08:22 Post subject:

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MM, 真羡慕幕你好快手. 我刚才还和秋香通电话, 说有漂亮MM等她 Wink

姐姐，我回忆不出来秋香是哪位姐姐了^_^
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Posted: 2007-08-30 02:09:50 Post subject:

鹧鸪天嫩约无凭暗绕桩，琴台歌舞点秋香。照晴眸子波明里，朝暮清尊奉柳杨。思寸缕，语荷塘，赋情偏与绣花枪。赓吟续咏疏狂韵，仍是新声总未央。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-08-30 06:09:19 Post subject:

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白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM, 真羡慕幕你好快手. 我刚才还和秋香通电话, 说有漂亮MM等她 Wink

姐姐，我回忆不出来秋香是哪位姐姐了^_^

MM, 那是我们对秋叶的戏称 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-08-30 14:31:08 Post subject:

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征尘载袖 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM, 真羡慕幕你好快手. 我刚才还和秋香通电话, 说有漂亮MM等她 Wink

姐姐，我回忆不出来秋香是哪位姐姐了^_^

MM, 那是我们对秋叶的戏称 Very Happy

姐姐，那我的《鹧鸪天》没写错^_^
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