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劳动者的诗
天一黑
童生


Joined: 30 Aug 2007
Posts: 52

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PostPosted: 2007-09-21 20:03:00    Post subject: 劳动者的诗 Reply with quote

瞧俺当年在菜店干活码的:


苦瓜,苦瓜,生了个孩子叫娃哈哈;


白萝卜,白萝卜,你不要光着屁股跳舞;



天边的小鸟,只归上帝管

我爬上屋顶去看它

它只有一点点





今晚无月,

听人家讲,冒里肉便宜,

便赶车去买。

刚进冒里,

人潮如海,

圣诞树下,挤着打滚的孩子。

俺直奔肉铺,

肉案子早被人翻乱。

俺仔细寻去,

果然,好大包牛肉,只要2块5。

顺手抱起两包,

搂在肋下,长起牛肉精神。

交罢银子,拜过圣诞先生离去。

一路不冷冬风,

路灯如昼。

2)
青春的小鸟在我的手心里乱跑

但是,它们已经没有了力量

划不出血痕也掐不出血泡


1)
快乐好象冰山上的雪莲花;

累了一天的累,

你抽走了俺全身的力气活儿,

但你拽不走俺耳叉上夹着的雪莲花




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日子如水,劳动如墨

感情如水,精神如墨

昼出如水,夜归如墨

shopping如水,税单如墨

大路如水,幽林如墨

草地如水,樱花如墨

三月如水,四月如墨

春天如水,夏天如墨

妹妹如水,姐姐如墨

衣诀如水,窈窕如墨

话语如水,声音如墨

指尖如水,梦醒如墨

风如水,雨如水

心如水,思如水

心思痛处,风雨如墨

风雨深处,心思如墨

他乡如水,家乡如墨

家乡如水,他乡如墨

船栏经过
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天一黑
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PostPosted: 2007-09-21 20:04:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

衣袂
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2007-09-21 20:05:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈, 天黑. 你这首好可爱 broke teeth
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天一黑
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PostPosted: 2007-09-21 20:08:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

回的也太快了吧,多少泪水,汗水在里面
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白水
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2007-09-21 20:14:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

还有墨水和酒水.

SORRY, 开个玩笑.
写的不错, 有生活, 有新意, 还有点点.......真情
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