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在屋顶有座花园
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PostPosted: 2007-08-20 20:32:26    Post subject: 在屋顶有座花园 Reply with quote
在屋顶有座花园 (七夕所作)


浅笑焉
雨窥窗外

水酒兮
玻光明眸

看着可能我的女儿的妈妈
甚至就女儿般的小嘴, 是

那么, 我怎能亲亲, 又怎能
不亲亲

举箸嘛
咄咄书空

杯盘呢
僧侣罗汉

妳是端坐对面的美人鱼
我在海龟桌面卜卦寻纹

我若是诗园丁
妳会说: 在屋顶有座花园
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PostPosted: 2007-08-20 20:44:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
挺有人情味的, 提
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PostPosted: 2007-08-20 20:47:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
包括這一首, 我想以現代生活的實體概念來影想鵲橋, 老說古老的根本神話鵲橋,煩死了. Laughing 擔待些, 別處看多了鵲橋.忍不住了.

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PostPosted: 2007-08-20 20:50:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
是, 思路是该放宽些了.
你就先吃螃蟹吧 Razz
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PostPosted: 2007-08-20 20:56:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
是, 思路是该放宽些了.
你就先吃螃蟹吧 Razz


哈哈,但將冷眼看螃蟹...

這裡的每一小段, 都含有不同的'隔'的概念.

見笑了.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-20 21:03:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
博弈 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
是, 思路是该放宽些了.
你就先吃螃蟹吧 Razz


哈哈,但將冷眼看螃蟹...

這裡的每一小段, 都含有不同的'隔'的概念.

見笑了.


最近瞎忙, 灵感吓跑了, 只好看人家吃了 Embarassed

读出来了, 这首小诗挺耐品的.
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