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感悟结婚证书
雨木
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Joined: 22 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-09-02 11:26:18    Post subject: 感悟结婚证书 Reply with quote

感悟结婚证书

春风牵春花
白云伴晚霞
相约滨河路
暮步柳荫下
老翁练太极
靓妹把琴拉
一曲送情郎
醉得众人夸
无视路边草
哪管声噪杂
默恨灯光亮
羞胆更害怕
午夜进影院
兴观阿诗玛
心动喜握手
对面红脸颊
双眸成直线
耳边悄悄话
来夜去公园
绿地银光洒
芬芳香气飘
只因在初夏
湖边笛声飞
圆月中天挂
吻过定姻缘
立业方成家
忽得高声叫
“怎就睡这啦’’
惊醒实惭愧
好友才救驾
岂敢再怠慢
差媒去她家
求婚道顺利
归功是调查
闻我体康健
闻我有文化
闻我讲诚信
闻我品质佳
闻我孝父母
闻我不算傻
这才送彩礼
鸳鸯没招打
吃过酒席后
还有另说法
送台缝纫机
好把衣服扎
买辆自行车
床边听戏匣
四件均备齐
岳丈笑哈哈
申领结婚证
享受美生涯
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晓松
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Joined: 26 Feb 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-09-02 15:49:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

古人所讲的四大乐事:久旱逢甘霖,他乡遇故知,洞房花烛夜,金榜题名时。如今你已经占两项了。呵呵,应该庆贺才行!不要光是感悟。(还剩下的两项,有的要凭运气。)
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雨木
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Joined: 22 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-09-05 08:52:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
古人所讲的四大乐事:久旱逢甘霖,他乡遇故知,洞房花烛夜,金榜题名时。如今你已经占两项了。呵呵,应该庆贺才行!不要光是感悟。(还剩下的两项,有的要凭运气。)


谢谢提读指点和鼓励,还望多多批评指正。向您学习问好!!
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