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原创诗歌投稿《牧羊人的月亮》
温暖
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PostPosted: 2007-08-18 02:15:58    Post subject: 原创诗歌投稿《牧羊人的月亮》 Reply with quote

《牧羊人的月亮》

别急,我也不,为什么急着天亮
还有什么比夜的笃行更值得毕生沉溺
仿佛爱也不行,对了,也不说爱
趁着迷路的钟点彼此推诿
我要用千杯不倒的酒量把它们一一喝醉
之后,换日偷天

虹,在星空下绝密地升起
首次向我昭示远方海蓝色的故园
那儿有海蓝色的麦田
海蓝色的马匹,和羊群
和梦的质地一模一样的,海蓝色的月光
......

还是远了,黎明将至的前奏
缀满星辰的夜的翅膀徐徐扬起
和着祷歌的天音
一瞬,徒然而起,旋向天外

我得闭一会儿眼睛
我还不能很快适应光明
或者说,我还是贪图夜的犹豫、光线和温度
贪图夜于夜,肝胆相照的提纯和献与
仿佛在每个早春的门口
无一例外地回望并怀念一切奢华的冬天

故园,大多时候我糊涂
我担心转世时,又会擦肩
赶着我的马和羊群
我去,就现在,紧紧地走,不等来生
偶尔停住,张望前方海蓝色的炊烟
并在沿途拾起
一切,和我息息相关的片段
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-08-18 02:38:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

好美的诗歌,空灵~
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-08-18 03:35:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗情画意
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-08-18 03:48:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

佳作!

非常欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-18 20:47:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得很柔情
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