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满汗全溪
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Posted: 2007-08-17 06:11:19 Post subject: 暗香，嘻``

香溪秀谷，引蝶飞蜂绕，暗浮烟幕。一点胭脂，微染榴裙叹谁顾。渐旋风情近也，涟漪里、柳垂杨舞。不消说、拘束飞英，漂泊浪萍处。何楚，且难诉？把画扇碎摇，别是吾汝。梦回又付，怀拥琵琶问良苦。相伴云连水复，休惯使、六神无主。怎一个、愁了得，卦爻逮数。

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Posted: 2007-08-17 11:28:02 Post subject:

真个是细膩情思"云连水复","画扇碎摇,别是吾汝"八字形象地写出了一位少女几许焦躁不安的形象,好文采.

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Posted: 2007-08-17 14:39:35 Post subject:

黄老师, 您也发现这几个宝贝MM文采好了吧?

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满汗全溪
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Posted: 2007-08-17 20:22:58 Post subject:

美女情怀是人美还是词美 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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满汗全溪
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Posted: 2007-08-17 22:00:22 Post subject:

我贴的那个美女不是我，嘻``

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Posted: 2007-08-17 22:37:06 Post subject:

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满汗全溪 wrote:

我贴的那个美女不是我，嘻``

我知道
不是你的妹妹
就是你的姐姐
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暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-08-17 23:11:23 Post subject:

呵呵，才思敏捷呀．佩服。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-08-18 05:41:13 Post subject:

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我知道
不是你的妹妹
就是你的姐姐
Laughing

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千万别说出去哈

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满汗全溪
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Posted: 2007-08-18 05:41:39 Post subject:

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呵呵，才思敏捷呀．佩服。

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白水
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Posted: 2007-08-18 06:05:34 Post subject:

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hepingdao wrote:

我知道
不是你的妹妹
就是你的姐姐
Laughing

Laughing

千万别说出去哈

说出去就把调皮MM吓跑了

water fall

water fall

想念

love you

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Posted: 2007-08-18 07:08:25 Post subject:

白水,您贴出的耍舌头的小女孩是七仙女之一吧,调皮可爱的样儿,真是人见人爱!

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Posted: 2007-08-18 07:16:04 Post subject:

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白水,您贴出的耍舌头的小女孩是七仙女之一吧,调皮可爱的样儿,真是人见人爱!

我也不知道, 在我梦里她就长这样 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-08-18 08:29:50 Post subject:

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白水 Moonlight wrote:

黄洋界 wrote:

白水,您贴出的耍舌头的小女孩是七仙女之一吧,调皮可爱的样儿,真是人见人爱!

我也不知道, 在我梦里她就长这样 Very Happy

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這才是老實話！

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Posted: 2007-08-19 03:29:37 Post subject:

易安居士来了嘛。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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