乙木先生
童生
Joined: 25 Jul 2007
Posts: 50
Location: 中国河南平顶山市
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 Posted: 2007-08-17 00:39:33 Post subject: 《望月》 |
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《望月》
一轮
皎月
团圆出
亲切
半弯着
残月
两眼，望出个
游子
悲凉凉地
心切！
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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2007-08-17 15:28:58 Post subject: |
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天凉好个秋
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-08-18 03:39:14 Post subject: |
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| 阴晴圆缺诉情怀 |
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2007-08-18 17:40:51 Post subject: |
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悲凉凉地
心切！
....................简洁. |
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金金
进士出身
Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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乙木先生
童生
Joined: 25 Jul 2007
Posts: 50
Location: 中国河南平顶山市
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| Posted: 2007-08-19 19:16:04 Post subject: |
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感谢各位诗友点评
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