叶英儿
秀才
Joined: 03 Jun 2006
Posts: 577
Location: 中国
叶英儿Collection |
 Posted: 2007-08-12 00:05:40 Post subject: 卜算子.荷 |
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碧叶俩株荷
怒放在山涧
一阵风吹加雨淋
花朵尤鲜艳
无意苦争菲
泥垢休污染
君子风格美誉扬
藕果人夸赞
（浙江、叶英儿） |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2007-08-12 20:37:19 Post subject: |
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| 君子风格美誉扬 |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
| Posted: 2007-08-12 20:46:28 Post subject: |
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碧叶俩株荷
怒放在山涧
是看到的情景吗？拜读，问好！ |
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又一方天
秀才
Joined: 16 Nov 2006
Posts: 385
又一方天Collection |
| Posted: 2007-08-13 18:36:34 Post subject: |
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和叶英儿:
《听 荷》
滴哒轻柔随夜风，透窗谁弄和弦声。
一池荷叶不肯睡，娴熟园珠唤黎明。
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空钩久垂
钓得
烟波月醉 |
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野航
秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 547
Location: toronto
野航Collection |
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鼓掌。
对诗词格律需有更深钻研。
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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暗香如沁
秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
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