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疼痛的世界开出鲜花

鹤雨
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Posted: 2007-07-13 23:15:31 Post subject: 疼痛的世界开出鲜花

疼痛的世界开出鲜花黑夜重重的打在身上远处的身影依稀消残光的身影在黑暗之外灿烂夜肆意漫延生命亦如这夜般绵长那身影那光以及我的身体就在此命运的夜晚彻底消亡世界我唯一的遗物我唯一的疼痛在今晚的夜色中如花绽放 2007年7月13日于上海 _________________ 愿意和大家共同进步!

金金
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Posted: 2007-07-14 00:05:22 Post subject:

问好！！！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-08-15 15:25:17 Post subject:

有现代诗的感受和语言风格，但觉得“世界”太大，具体些、细节些可能更感人些。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-08-15 16:38:52 Post subject:

问好! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-08-15 20:40:23 Post subject:

久不见, 问好鹤雨

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2007-08-16 07:43:01 Post subject:

好诗。问好 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-16 08:32:59 Post subject:

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