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莫名的秋雨
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PostPosted: 2007-08-25 01:24:45    Post subject: 莫名的秋雨 Reply with quote
莫名的秋雨

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这个下午,没人说忧伤
天空明了什么?
暴雨一阵紧似一阵

问讯被水冲走
空调降至零下
雨,热在闷热之前

开窗,暑热的尘烟涌入
夹杂青草的臊味
无声落在脸颊

秋雨过后，冬真的不远了
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PostPosted: 2007-08-25 02:22:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
我们这里这几天天天下雨，被你写的 Very Happy
我们的冬天有名的冷，所以刚刚搬家到办公室旁边，只有50米。省得路上麻烦。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-25 02:45:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
全世界都在下雨啊～
幸好没被流放到西伯里亚，那上班方便了哈～祝愉快！ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-08-25 06:34:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
信手牵来淡淡的秋意, 凄美
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PostPosted: 2007-08-25 18:17:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
信手牵来淡淡的秋意, 凄美


呵呵，有人批评我的诗歌总是写哀怨的，以后尽量写高兴点的～问好白水妹妹～ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-08-25 21:52:52    Post subject: Reply with quote
什么?白水是妹妹吗?
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 00:23:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
很抒情的。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 01:19:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
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什么?白水是妹妹吗?


呵呵，应该是女性，不清楚是不是妹妹～不过我习惯叫她妹妹！别人叫她白水兄！
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 01:21:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
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很抒情的。

问好迪拜～ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 02:32:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
Arrow Crying or Very sad Razz Shocked 平白无辜的酒窖我调弦了
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 06:01:45    Post subject: Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 06:11:58    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好各位。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 06:41:16    Post subject: Reply with quote
一言 wrote:
Arrow Crying or Very sad Razz Shocked 平白无辜的酒窖我调弦了
哈，需要翻译下，就叫你调弦了？没有啊，悲伤的，喜悦的都要写～ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 06:42:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
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问好韩兄～ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 06:46:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
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问好各位。


握手冷妹妹～ Very Happy
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