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[试作古韵] 古诗三首

李智强
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Posted: 2007-08-10 05:58:20 Post subject: [试作古韵] 古诗三首

躬耕又是一度耕种忙，农人驼背向夕阳。雀儿频向田中采，秧苗点水化玉龙。捕蝉小儿旱地撑长蒿，竹末枝头抹嫩胶。稚手颤巍移向蝉，红枫不落自飘摇。农者乐天驼人河畔走田尾，旭日东昇渐西宇。碧波轻柔流云动，白鹭常在垄上飞。 _________________ 【狂到世人皆欲杀】【醉来天子不能传】

叶英儿
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Posted: 2007-08-10 18:27:31 Post subject:

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戴玨
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Posted: 2007-08-11 03:43:34 Post subject:

韻不對，用古韻寫詩請參看置頂的平水韻部。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

李智强
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Posted: 2007-08-13 05:00:44 Post subject:

谢［叶英儿］与［戴玨］．至于韵，为了格律，自觉意境毁坏不少，按［中华新韵］校对后就一二字不符合．所以自己不严格要求了．．．还是谢谢［戴玨］批评｀ _________________ 【狂到世人皆欲杀】【醉来天子不能传】

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