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太常引<夏蝉>

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Posted: 2007-08-09 18:24:39 Post subject: 太常引<夏蝉>

太常引<夏蝉> 夜来素柬寄诗行, 晨起倦梳妆. 郁郁觅清凉, 草浓处, 蝉鸣后窗. 前澜未尽, 新波又起, 曲曲断柔肠. 俯首弄琴旁, 几多泪, 痴情暗伤.

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Posted: 2007-08-09 21:36:37 Post subject:

几多泪, 痴情暗伤. ----焉何闻蝉神伤? _________________ 空钩久垂钓得烟波月醉

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Posted: 2007-08-10 06:27:41 Post subject:

湖边蝉索树千行，声厉淡晨妆。摸摸屁蹲凉，青紫处，延浸后窗。葫芦未起，瓜瓢又落，白水贯穿肠。移步井台旁，忍痛泪，揉揉跌伤。

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Posted: 2007-08-10 06:29:44 Post subject:

又一方天 wrote:

几多泪,
痴情暗伤.
----焉何闻蝉神伤?

我知道为什么，就是不说，嘻嘻``

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Posted: 2007-08-10 18:32:41 Post subject:

又一方天 wrote:

几多泪,
痴情暗伤.
----焉何闻蝉神伤?

谢谢又一方天. 问好.

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Posted: 2007-08-10 18:39:04 Post subject:

海南丢 wrote:

湖边蝉索树千行，声厉淡晨妆。
摸摸屁蹲凉，青紫处，延浸后窗。

葫芦未起，瓜瓢又落，白水贯穿肠。
移步井台旁，忍痛泪，揉揉跌伤。

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小丢丢, 你的诗词总让人看了就乐. 忍痛泪，揉揉跌伤. 看来对你来说司空见惯了 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-08-10 19:17:25 Post subject:

前澜未尽, 新波又起, 曲曲断柔肠. _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2007-08-10 21:51:42 Post subject:

婉转语句令人伤。

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Posted: 2007-08-11 05:18:57 Post subject:

谢谢野航, 莹雪.问好

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Posted: 2007-08-11 15:52:33 Post subject:

白水JJ好！我又来欣赏了

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