黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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 Posted: 2007-08-01 14:34:12 Post subject: 和白水 |
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和白水<<如梦令 古渡>>
白水兄轻掷小石一枚,击起层层涟漪,在下前来学步,学步!
借问风来何处
一曲新词惊霧
天外降灵猫
鱼也游吟南浦
轻步
轻步
傾耳诗盟畅诉 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-08-01 18:29:15 Post subject: |
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| 好一句“傾耳诗盟畅诉”！ |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2007-08-01 18:57:46 Post subject: |
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天外降灵猫
鱼也游吟南浦
好眼力. 黄老师, 谢谢你和诗. 这两位思路敏捷, 文笔不凡, 论和诗, 白水原本只有招架之功, 全无应战之力, 加上近日偶感风寒, 晕呼呼的, 更写不出象样的词来, 真对不住这猫和鱼呢.你一来可就好了.
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海南丢
秀才
Joined: 25 Jul 2007
Posts: 152
Location: 臭豆腐作坊
海南丢Collection |
| Posted: 2007-08-02 00:30:00 Post subject: |
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醉眼迷登眺处，似有似无波雾。
间嗝最销魂，著意狂心系浦。
舞步，舞步，细细香尘若诉。 |
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暗香如沁
秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
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