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◎倒叙

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Posted: 2007-08-12 06:31:39 Post subject: ◎倒叙

◎倒叙接到弟弟的来信天刚刚黑。提及短暂的生命对于回忆只显得过长伤感的情绪，瞬间填满整张更深的夜我将信中叙述近况的后半段裁去—— 　　　　我不忍见到分离一如童年看悲剧故事，我总是从最后一章开始再一次往回重读，以便唤醒死去的公主倒叙 —— 　　　　是我的一帖秘密良方然而怎么样也治愈不了你和我之间的爱情，俯拾皆是，不停告别的哀感 2007.07.16

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-12 15:11:39 Post subject:

我觉得这首诗表现得不错。喜欢！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-12 16:30:41 Post subject:

谢谢海军我自己也十分钟爱这首

想起
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