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【原创】笑

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Posted: 2009-02-21 02:22:14 Post subject: 【原创】笑

笑她本来有一个很爽的名字从我们出生的那一刻起却丢了记号后来我慢慢知道了心悦的含义学着大人的样子把想法用表情和动作直播出去当我背起书包挽着太阳上路一朵小花一株小草以及一只可以飞翔的昆虫都成了她的名字再后来我遇见了你才懂得把她含在眼底与心上 2009.02.12 _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-02-21 02:51:34 Post subject:

灵动，欢快，丝丝甜

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Posted: 2009-02-21 04:49:15 Post subject:

这名字阳光股灿烂 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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Posted: 2009-02-21 14:21:47 Post subject:

这首诗还是不错的，期待更好的作品。先顶一下！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2009-02-21 15:42:55 Post subject:

远握！对于白水，骨笛，海军的支持表示感谢！默默地祝福着...... _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-02-22 03:27:01 Post subject:

很清新的一首小诗！问好！ _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑

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Posted: 2009-02-22 08:14:06 Post subject:

挺美好的委婉清秀～问好，多写～ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2009-02-23 04:01:48 Post subject:

晚上好！感谢国福，红红的支持！祝福2009！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-02-23 04:16:54 Post subject:

再后来我遇见了你才懂得把她含在眼底与心上甜美，明朗的~

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Posted: 2009-02-24 00:01:40 Post subject:

(^__^) 嘻嘻……感谢明月支持！祝福！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-02-25 14:13:24 Post subject:

支持。顶！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2009-03-02 20:55:58 Post subject:

呵呵，少君什么时候学的这么节约了！玩笑！祝好！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-03-04 01:54:51 Post subject:

来看娇阳！！写得不错！！喜欢

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Posted: 2009-03-05 01:24:07 Post subject:

嘿嘿，想不到啊，在这里能看到子花啊！谢谢！祝福！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-03-05 04:47:17 Post subject:

再后来我遇见了你才懂得把她含在眼底与心上问好娇娇! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2009-03-05 21:49:32 Post subject:

大家都支持，我不支持说不过去晚到了，见谅 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2009-03-06 04:23:42 Post subject:

谢谢琼裙和上城！默默的祝福！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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Posted: 2009-03-07 01:43:28 Post subject:

她本来有一个很爽的名字从我们出生的那一刻起却丢了记号这三句很蒙胧。什么是“丢了记号”，是表明一个人失去了的“存在”么？如果这样解，倒非常好。浅读 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2009-03-13 21:03:16 Post subject:

感谢上城二次支持！握手！是啊，我暂时对诗歌的理解程度也许很模糊，不过呢，写开头的那句话时，我只是想到了人在出生时的一幕！哭声，淹没了所有的存在！欢迎多指教！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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