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被那个午后背起的草原
春雨
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PostPosted: 2007-08-07 15:24:19    Post subject: 被那个午后背起的草原 Reply with quote

被那个午后背起的草原

黑暗流淌在静止的两腿之间
行走就总会有延伸的路线
生存的历程明亮的挂在眼前
在我们的指缝间滴落的是昨晚盼望的明天
牵挂刺痛记忆时仰天长啸
明亮的波浪里有寂寞浮现
相同的呼吸是美丽的二重奏
远处有清脆的鸟鸣落在碧绿的叶面
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-08-07 16:42:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

相同的呼吸是美丽的二重奏...明快,可以深入些.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-08 00:31:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

组织好语言间的关系以求更好的意象联结
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