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飞翔的草原
杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-08-02 14:25:56    Post subject: 飞翔的草原 Reply with quote

飞翔的草原


我看见飞翔的草原
红色和灰色的马匹
风把群草向远方驱赶
还有白色的羊
缓慢移动一片湖水
而远方的湛蓝
就是所有要汇集的风暴
风暴里蕴含巨大的惊雷

我还看见草原的闪电
轻轻掠过一只小羊的身体
迅疾的鞭梢
像一只刚被捕获的雏鹰
喙在我的手臂上
留下一个轻轻的咬痕
我的身体进驻
梦中突然惊厥的疼痛
它来自一只复仇的鹰的眼睛

我走到哪里
哪里就有草原的影子
梦中的一片清洌的湖水
湖边我和那个骑红马的姑娘相遇
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PostPosted: 2007-08-02 15:26:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

含着深意

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PostPosted: 2007-08-02 19:59:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

我走到哪里
哪里的天空就有草原的影子
梦中的一片清洌的湖水
湖边我和那个骑红马的姑娘相遇
——好美的句子,喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-02 20:05:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

我还看见草原的闪电
轻轻掠过一只小羊的身体
迅疾的鞭梢
像一只刚被捕获的雏鹰
喙在我的手臂上
留下一个轻轻的咬痕
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-08-02 21:29:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

而远方的湛蓝
就是所有要汇集的风暴
风暴里蕴含巨大的惊雷


学习海军的诗歌~问好!
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-08-03 15:38:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
含着深意

谢和平岛兄!!!远握!!
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-08-03 15:39:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
我走到哪里
哪里的天空就有草原的影子
梦中的一片清洌的湖水
湖边我和那个骑红马的姑娘相遇
——好美的句子,喜欢!

呵呵!!谢诗人!!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-03 15:40:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

溪语 wrote:
我还看见草原的闪电
轻轻掠过一只小羊的身体
迅疾的鞭梢
像一只刚被捕获的雏鹰
喙在我的手臂上
留下一个轻轻的咬痕


谢赏读!!问候溪语诗人好!!!
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-08-03 15:41:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
而远方的湛蓝
就是所有要汇集的风暴
风暴里蕴含巨大的惊雷


学习海军的诗歌~问好!


谢半溪明月诗人!多交流,共提 高!!
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——拙作《离开村庄》
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PostPosted: 2007-08-03 18:18:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

我看见天空中飞翔的草原
“红色和灰色的马匹
风把群草向远方驱赶
还有白色的羊
缓慢移动一片湖水
而远方的湛蓝
就是所有要汇集的风暴
风暴里蕴含巨大的惊雷 ”

诗中有画,冲击视角,耐读!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-05 05:33:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

多见闪光的语言,学习!
稍稍显杂。我更喜欢意境单一的诗歌。个人习惯。
不必考虑。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-05 19:46:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

诉说没弄好


想像力不错
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