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冯六一
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PostPosted: 2007-08-16 23:15:30    Post subject: 诗五首 Reply with quote

二胡



江河
沿着两弦
逆流而上


两岸的风景
艰难地闪现
在悲壮的岁月中流走


江河的源流
其实就在心头
二胡
一千年
还是在民间生活


那手和弓
腾跃的地方
不是上游
就是下游



瓷器



典雅的女子
一样的品质


伫立在风尘
好听的声音
藏起来了


高贵的心灵
锋利如刃
以伤害拒绝伤害
让独自的琴声
飘得更远



古楼



古老的目光
逼视鹰的高度


远行了人
远行了岁月
没有远行的是鸟儿


一片白云
高远地穿越
檫亮某个朝代
某个人物







一朵 一朵
菊不成群
有些冷


风急了
雨凉了
菊燃烧热情
自己取暖


菊在梦里
做了新娘



木椅



一柄斧子
改变了命运


长和短
弯和直
岁月露出了伤痕


某日檫拭
还惊得一滴鸟声
仓皇逃出
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PostPosted: 2007-08-16 23:22:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有韵味的一组小诗
欢迎冯六一先生!
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冯六一
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PostPosted: 2007-08-16 23:26:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢你.刚上来,请多指教.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-18 03:43:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有档次


风急了
雨凉了
菊燃烧热情
自己取暖


的诗作!欢迎新朋友!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-18 04:55:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

精练有味~问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-18 21:05:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

浮雕一般的诗歌.............................
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