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五绝一组（问候大家）

爱松
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Posted: 2007-06-03 04:43:23 Post subject: 五绝一组（问候大家）

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Posted: 2007-06-03 07:36:39 Post subject:

独游月半西山冷，滇池静影浮。横舟渔火暗，旧梦几经流。《》喜欢。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-06-03 16:19:09 Post subject:

更喜“题敦煌飞天”。

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Posted: 2007-06-04 01:46:44 Post subject:

屈原那首，我觉得二更好些． _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-06-04 16:37:16 Post subject:

雨打山前路，风摇落魄人。年年心碎地，老树又添新。这一首令人黯然。总的说来，你的绝句的骨气在当今旧体诗人中可称上流。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

晓松
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Posted: 2007-06-04 16:57:10 Post subject:

爱松的诗，短小精悍。尤其喜欢悼屈原那首：死生犹可取，气骨岂能图？溺水三千尺，长天怒一呼！欢迎新朋友！

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Posted: 2007-06-06 01:09:21 Post subject:

爱松的“五绝一组”有意境，爱读。“悼屈原”一首，我赞同暗香如沁的看法，第二首好。

爱松
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Posted: 2007-06-06 16:37:09 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

独游

月半西山冷，滇池静影浮。
横舟渔火暗，旧梦几经流。

《》喜欢。。

。

谢阅。

爱松
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Posted: 2007-06-06 16:37:49 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

更喜“题敦煌飞天”。

问候！

爱松
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Posted: 2007-06-06 16:38:22 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

屈原那首，我觉得二更好些．

好的，谢谢。

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Posted: 2007-06-06 16:39:04 Post subject:

野航 wrote:

雨打山前路，风摇落魄人。
年年心碎地，老树又添新。

这一首令人黯然。总的说来，你的绝句的骨气在当今旧体诗人中可称上流。

问好：）

爱松
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Posted: 2007-06-06 16:39:40 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

爱松的诗，短小精悍。尤其喜欢悼屈原那首：
死生犹可取，气骨岂能图？
溺水三千尺，长天怒一呼！

欢迎新朋友！

请多指教！

爱松
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Posted: 2007-06-06 16:40:34 Post subject:

老山 wrote:

爱松的“五绝一组”有意境，爱读。“悼屈原”一首，我赞同暗香如沁的看法，第二首好。

问好老山，谢谢。

laofeng
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Posted: 2007-08-07 07:58:15 Post subject: 来问候爱松老弟！

野航 wrote:

雨打山前路，风摇落魄人。
年年心碎地，老树又添新。

这一首令人黯然。总的说来，你的绝句的骨气在当今旧体诗人中可称上流。

确实如此，精品！

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