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夫草
童生


Joined: 15 Jul 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-08-02 22:54:22    Post subject: [原创] 选择 Reply with quote




河床懒散地躺在那里
灼热的阳光爆出地裂纹
在不慊地苦笑
鱼骨泛着白光
脆瘦的河水在河床上
画着
弯弯曲曲的线


单身汉


夜,深沉的夜
那不安分的蛐蛐
无奈地
在吼叫

月光霸占着这世界的
大部分空间
那散碎的阴影
是他的盲区

我踏进亭廊的阴影里
那里已被一对对情侣
给占据

呵,这正是我缺失的部分


盗墓人


送葬人消逝在地平线
没了哀愁,夜降临
点点磷火撕裂
黑夜
阴蜮 颤栗的
森林旁,一只惊兔
狂奔


选择


有人说,一个人的诞生
就是另一个死亡灵魂的
转世和再生。在阴凄的
世界里,我的灵魂可憎地徘徊

孤独的我,想试探着
去寻找个伴侣,这个念头在我心中
刚一闪现,就有无数的鬼蜮
镞拥上来
如同黑夜里青阴的月光
笼罩着我

虚伪、阴险、狡诈… … …

最后我还是选择了孤独与不幸
伴随我
诞生在这个世界

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kokho
进士出身


Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
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PostPosted: 2007-08-02 22:56:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

精简但是形象强烈 ;))

摆渡问好。。


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乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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PostPosted: 2007-08-03 15:23:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢第一首的白描写法。不错的诗!!!问候诗人!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751
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