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放飞（外一首）
淡水
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Joined: 06 Jul 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-08-03 10:48:28    Post subject: 放飞（外一首） Reply with quote
鹰在地上
鹰低
我低
犁田的指掌
把鹰爪擦响

鹰在天上
云高
鹰高
颤动的翅膀
把云絮拔长

2007，8，2

干燥

热浪
一股一股
由肺部涌上
卡在喉口
癌细胞就在这时
让沸腾的脾气升温
及至爆发
扩散
提起河水
赶鱼群上岸

2007，8，2
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-08-03 14:58:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
犁田的指掌
把鹰爪擦响
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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淡水
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PostPosted: 2007-08-04 05:18:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
杨海军 wrote:
犁田的指掌
把鹰爪擦响

谢杨海军阅评。问好。
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金金
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PostPosted: 2007-08-05 19:34:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
淡的，平的

凸的


美的
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淡水
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PostPosted: 2007-08-07 04:58:50    Post subject: Reply with quote
金金 wrote:
淡的，平的

凸的


美的

多谢金金点评。问好！！！
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