驾言出游 童生

Joined: 01 Aug 2007 Posts: 22 Location: 中国 驾言出游Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-01 05:34:21 Post subject: 街上(外一首) |
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街上
满街的杨花 飘着
悄悄落下来
在心头
堆起 层层愁絮
地下道
一个人 走在地下道里
听脚步声
从这头 传到那头
在那头的你 能听到我
为你的心跳吗? _________________ 欲把西湖比西子,从来佳茗似佳人 |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-08-01 11:29:36 Post subject: |
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很有味道的诗歌 更惊人的头像 :))
问好 新朋友。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-03 06:53:27 Post subject: |
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精辟.  |
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溪语 秀才
Joined: 16 Mar 2007 Posts: 509 Location: 中国恩施 溪语Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-03 08:05:39 Post subject: |
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呵呵,欢迎新朋友! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西 |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
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驾言出游 童生

Joined: 01 Aug 2007 Posts: 22 Location: 中国 驾言出游Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-03 17:20:44 Post subject: |
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谢谢各位光临!初来乍到,以后还请各位多多指教!  _________________ 欲把西湖比西子,从来佳茗似佳人 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-03 23:47:56 Post subject: |
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呵呵,有意思的~问好新朋友,头像很吓人啊  |
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