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有鸟飞过
和平岛
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2006-09-30 11:59:01    Post subject: 有鸟飞过 Reply with quote

有鸟飞过
文/洛夫

香烟摊老李的二胡
把我们家的巷子
拉成一绺长长的湿发

院子里的门开着
香片随着心事 向
杯底沉落
茶几上
烟灰无非是既白且冷
无非是春去秋来

你能不能为我
在藤椅中的千种盹姿
各起一个名字?

晚报扔在脸上
睡眼中


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Location: 吉林省和龙市华林路64-12-1号
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PostPosted: 2015-01-30 05:37:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

尾三句诗写方式,本人不提倡。本诗诗语在整体上不是浑然天成。
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