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2007.砖
冷水
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 08:06:33    Post subject: 2007.砖 Reply with quote

围一团黑色的火,坐下
不穿衣服,我们低头
试试吃一方水土



那一碗水,平不平
里面都有一个天空
民以食为天的人理当吞下



现在,把那块砖烤熟
紧闭嘴唇,论语告诫:割不正不食
2007年这块砖,正好方方正正



割去剩余部分
我们来吃吧
曾经厚泽苍生的这一块



趁着天黑,请跟我一起重新上树
用树叶遮盖面孔
尖叫,恢复到不会笑不会哭
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kino
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 18:59:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-07-27 02:38:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

冷水诗人的诗不错。提 读!!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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冷水
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PostPosted: 2007-07-27 10:37:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢鼓励
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徒举袖衣
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PostPosted: 2007-07-31 21:13:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

用力之处在我们经验之外的那些环节。学习.
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-08-01 00:05:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

异样感觉.沉重而辛酸!
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