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碎裂的花瓶

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-02 00:52:18 Post subject: 碎裂的花瓶

碎裂的花瓶一只花瓶碎裂像一次闪电的经历月光下闪电来过它的身体一座城堡訇然倒塌了一次深度干旱留下痛苦的犁痕一次碎裂一次开放瞬间的艳和芬芳流淌假若四周发出啧啧婉惜那么让我们悲叹那些瓷釉的命运就像一场风掠走的几片嫩叶它们无辜一只花瓶碎裂骨骼的声音让月光裂出无数道树形的峡谷让人想起冰山被风刀雕刻的情景 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-02 01:08:32 Post subject:

干净的语言的抒情，提。

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-02 07:18:44 Post subject:

在你博里读过了，再次欣赏～问好海军！

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-03 06:48:09 Post subject:

最欣赏末段

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-03 15:42:45 Post subject:

爱松 wrote:

干净的语言的抒情，提。

谢爱松诗人！！呵呵！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-03 15:43:31 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

在你博里读过了，再次欣赏～问好海军！ Smile

谢诗人关注！！！
_________________
走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-03 15:44:17 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

最欣赏末段

谢白水诗人！！！！！
_________________
走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-04 00:20:15 Post subject:

学习！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

kokho
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Posted: 2007-08-04 01:29:16 Post subject:

一只花瓶碎裂骨骼的声音让月光裂出无数道树形的峡谷让人想起冰山被风刀雕刻的情景《》很强烈的形象选择：））。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-08-05 19:25:28 Post subject:

总是让人惊喜的风格 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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