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[原创]月亮的花瓣(一组)

晓雾
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Posted: 2007-07-31 06:18:42 Post subject: [原创]月亮的花瓣(一组)

月亮的花瓣(一组) 文/晓雾《小竹林》这么安静竹叶上的天空让我安静下来早晨黄昏是纯粹的我守着虫鸣和一截墙守着叶子走远又回来然后我看见我30岁的窗户一天我的梦淌出来就浸泡了一块手上的石子一天我发现身后的城市也是石子《夜》我听见声音藏进深处另一些声音走出来我如趟起一汪的水裤脚湿着我在走向谁夜我看着星星的走向我看着它们的背上的光我跟着原野和一朵花的心境我慢慢剩下半个身子《一抹夕阳》这是一条路冷静下来的颜色靠近水声一边擦着天空的玻璃一边看着土地此时夕阳还在我指尖像一只鸟一只飞进星星里的鸟我看见它的背影火一样它走进一片黑夜《月亮的花瓣》我在月亮的花瓣上我想着时别人看见是一滴露风拂过来我抖了一下身子拾起掉落的神月亮的花瓣盛开夜的秘密我在想着一座村庄的样子那座村庄也在花瓣上我不知道它在想什么风不住地摇着花瓣万万年了不住地凋谢盛开 _________________ 晓雾博客欢迎光临！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/blogxiaowu http://blog.163.com/yeah_116

郭兴军
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Posted: 2007-07-31 06:55:34 Post subject:

诗的感觉好，语言有跳跃，不错！ _________________ 胜者为王。

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-01 19:52:25 Post subject:

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