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原创《前世*知音》(诗歌)
低处的迷雾
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 21:49:57    Post subject: 原创《前世*知音》(诗歌) Reply with quote

原创《前世*知音》(诗歌)

文低处的迷雾

前世的露水敛住我的肉体
柔软的腐香长出甜美的枝蔓
骨头里藏住的悬崖响彻起来
垂落的梦破处邂逅了
我的知音
清澈的气息撼动得
苏溪亭上草漫漫
我不在乎我的无知
风吹罗带时
我扔出我的湍急

斜拔金步摇
飘忽的头发浮满了陶罐
绝妙的悬念挪开凹陷在血压里的矮墙
金陵渡顺着我的身体淌下
着迷的词
小山楼抵抗住漆黑的涡流
我低着头
象遮住荒漠的桃花潮
涌动、震颤
给你最想要的树藤、波浪和弯曲
我的小脾气怪忧愁的
差一点揉碎传说里的水晶
差一点摧毁更深的自由

我很贱
我没见过男人
因而我在二百年的垃圾里
狂欢过一个夏天
因而我在色鬼的沸腾里犯困
烧掉血气吹动的房子
呵,那是不知羞耻的破烂儿
穿越滚滚红尘
来与我玩耍
那是一抹肮脏的兽迹
在鸾佩相逢的桂香陌上
设下水性扬花的圈套
来与我翻滚
并递给我惊世骇俗的乱和灼热
太厉害了
厉害得使我变成傻子

那麽
我都原谅
那麽
摁进我胸口的碎片
把我瓜分得完美而惊喜
知音啊,我被囚在人间这个乐园
泛起的尘土扬满我血内的山峦
我被埋掉的样子
香烂而绝望
班驳的气息隐见时光的壁画
你翻拣的桃子
迸裂着我的旧物
罗帏绣幕围香风
洋溢在家门口
还有细腰舞

伟大的沧桑让我触摸到出名的金子
让我异常庄严地感恩稀烂的勾引
瘀青散开的气象
恰似共剪西窗烛的午夜
绿影一千三百里
淹死浪进女人堆里打滚的
花耗子
淹死见着女人就卖余粮
还假装痴情的野苍蝇
浓郁的前世闪着电
闪烁的萧声追回失踪在我身上的
小叶子
知音啊,我热泪盈眶
我有可能迷恋你
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 02:40:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

迷人的叙述,学习 Surprised
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PostPosted: 2007-07-28 02:02:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

依旧是别致的诗风和语言 久不见 问好迷雾姐 我是阿润Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-07-29 03:58:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

甜美和迷愁
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PostPosted: 2007-07-29 04:16:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

别致的情诗
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PostPosted: 2007-07-30 15:28:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

桔子 wrote:
迷人的叙述,学习 Surprised



感谢来读。互相学习。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-30 15:29:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

木易沉香 wrote:
依旧是别致的诗风和语言 久不见 问好迷雾姐 我是阿润Smile



呵呵,又相逢了。问候你。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-30 15:30:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
甜美和迷愁



感谢你阅读。问候
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PostPosted: 2007-07-30 15:31:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿依琼裙 wrote:
别致的情诗



感谢你,问候
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PostPosted: 2007-08-02 00:09:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

震颤!惊世骇俗!

勇于历险.情感与语言的双重的历险.

灵魂的暴露的历险.

面向男人的历险.

顶一次.!

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