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想你的时候

彭世学
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Posted: 2007-07-30 15:30:29 Post subject: 想你的时候

想你的时侯彭世学想你时就点燃一支烟独坐窗前让往事的云烟渐渐把你抽象想你时就泡杯浓茶让苦涩的日子深入内心开出动人的芬芳想你时就画你深情的眸子秋水荡过来席卷我的忧郁让刻骨铭心的怀念再一次幻现你的娇颜想你时什么都不想了只将你的一点一滴一切的一切慢慢咀嚼 _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-07-30 15:35:38 Post subject:

帮你消灭零回复。问候。 _________________ 写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191

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Posted: 2007-07-30 20:02:12 Post subject:

想你时就画你深情的眸子秋水荡过来席卷我的忧郁让刻骨铭心的怀念再一次幻现你的娇颜 ————————语言干净。

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Posted: 2007-07-30 20:09:28 Post subject:

自然, 清纯.

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Posted: 2007-08-01 02:57:02 Post subject:

谢谢低处的迷雾阅读！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-08-01 02:58:58 Post subject:

kino wrote:

想你时就画你深情的眸子
秋水荡过来
席卷我的忧郁
让刻骨铭心的怀念
再一次幻现你的娇颜

————————语言干净。

谢谢kino朋友的点评！问好。
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我的博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue
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Posted: 2007-08-01 15:58:31 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

自然, 清纯.

多谢白水版主的点评！问好！
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认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料
我的博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue
《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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