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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-07-05 12:39:53    Post subject: <息> Reply with quote

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在那湛蓝的不时荡起浪花的湖面上
我看见一朵疲倦的白
慵懒的匍匐着
猜想, 那一定是条鱼儿
一条
受伤的鱼

看得出, 它再也不想
逆流搏击,甚至
无心躲避近在咫尺的鸥,虽然
它听得见饥肠的
咕咕声

就这样
无所顾忌的袒露着
剥落的鳞, 折断的鳍
唯独没有泪水
在你冷若凝脂的肌肤上流动
任波谷波峰

突然, 想随它而去

一个浪头盖上来
我们相拥
而眠
在水下柔软的草丛

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PostPosted: 2007-07-05 14:32:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

息养
很美
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PostPosted: 2007-07-05 17:31:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗要表达对受伤者的同情吗?

朗读,很美!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-05 17:55:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

任波谷波峰 ——简洁美丽的句子!

突然, 想随它而去 ——跳跃过渡!

一个浪头盖上来
我们相拥
而眠 ——深切的同情!
在水下柔软的草丛 ——命运的互救!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-05 20:03:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
息养
很美

谢PEACE. 文武之道, 一张一弛
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PostPosted: 2007-07-05 20:11:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
诗要表达对受伤者的同情吗?

朗读,很美!


问好晓松. 一种情绪吧......猜想每个人都会有这种瞬间.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-05 20:14:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
任波谷波峰 ——简洁美丽的句子!

突然, 想随它而去 ——跳跃过渡!

一个浪头盖上来
我们相拥
而眠 ——深切的同情!
在水下柔软的草丛 ——命运的互救!


谢谢山城子老师. 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-07-05 20:57:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

有时候也想这样永远地睡去,任生活的大海,载着自己随波逐流~好诗!朗诵的也好听 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-05 21:15:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow, 请介绍一下您在中央电视台的经历。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-05 23:15:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错.
非常有韵味.思考.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 15:09:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
有时候也想这样永远地睡去,任生活的大海,载着自己随波逐流~好诗!朗诵的也好听 Very Happy


偷懒的感觉是不错 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 15:10:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
wow, 请介绍一下您在中央电视台的经历。


以NOBODY的面目出现 Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 15:11:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

鲁齐 wrote:
不错.
非常有韵味.思考.

谢谢朋友, 问好 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 15:17:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

谁配的乐,又是谁朗诵的?太美了——使人忘忧并陶醉。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 19:36:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
谁配的乐,又是谁朗诵的?太美了——使人忘忧并陶醉。


一位叫叶雨的朋友帮着作的, 朗诵是谁我还真想不起名字 Embarassed 谢谢你喜欢
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PostPosted: 2007-08-21 00:34:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的,学习了!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-21 10:51:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

朗诵好 诗歌更好 :)

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PostPosted: 2007-08-21 15:57:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

石榴花开 wrote:
很好的,学习了!


问好, 希望多听的你的朗诵.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-21 15:59:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

kokho wrote:
朗诵好 诗歌更好 :)

。。


谢谢KOK.听的出是谁朗诵的吗?你认识的 Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-08-24 03:22:37    Post subject: Reply with quote




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