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白水
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Posted: 2007-07-05 12:39:53 Post subject: <息>

<息> 在那湛蓝的不时荡起浪花的湖面上我看见一朵疲倦的白慵懒的匍匐着猜想, 那一定是条鱼儿一条受伤的鱼看得出, 它再也不想逆流搏击,甚至无心躲避近在咫尺的鸥,虽然它听得见饥肠的咕咕声就这样无所顾忌的袒露着剥落的鳞, 折断的鳍唯独没有泪水在你冷若凝脂的肌肤上流动任波谷波峰突然, 想随它而去一个浪头盖上来我们相拥而眠在水下柔软的草丛

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Posted: 2007-07-05 14:32:39 Post subject:

息养很美 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-07-05 17:31:44 Post subject:

诗要表达对受伤者的同情吗？朗读，很美！

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Posted: 2007-07-05 17:55:51 Post subject:

任波谷波峰 ——简洁美丽的句子！突然, 想随它而去 ——跳跃过渡！一个浪头盖上来我们相拥而眠 ——深切的同情！在水下柔软的草丛 ——命运的互救！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2007-07-05 20:03:18 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

息养
很美

谢PEACE. 文武之道, 一张一弛

白水
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Posted: 2007-07-05 20:11:28 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

诗要表达对受伤者的同情吗？

朗读，很美！

问好晓松. 一种情绪吧......猜想每个人都会有这种瞬间.

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Posted: 2007-07-05 20:14:23 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

任波谷波峰 ——简洁美丽的句子！

突然, 想随它而去 ——跳跃过渡！

一个浪头盖上来
我们相拥
而眠 ——深切的同情！
在水下柔软的草丛 ——命运的互救！

谢谢山城子老师. 问好

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Posted: 2007-07-05 20:57:52 Post subject:

有时候也想这样永远地睡去,任生活的大海,载着自己随波逐流~好诗!朗诵的也好听

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Posted: 2007-07-05 21:15:37 Post subject:

wow, 请介绍一下您在中央电视台的经历。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-07-05 23:15:01 Post subject:

不错. 非常有韵味.思考. _________________ 诗歌是一面旗帜!

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Posted: 2007-07-06 15:09:27 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

有时候也想这样永远地睡去,任生活的大海,载着自己随波逐流~好诗!朗诵的也好听 Very Happy

偷懒的感觉是不错

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Posted: 2007-07-06 15:10:26 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

wow, 请介绍一下您在中央电视台的经历。

以NOBODY的面目出现 Wink

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Posted: 2007-07-06 15:11:02 Post subject:

鲁齐 wrote:

不错.
非常有韵味.思考.

谢谢朋友, 问好

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Posted: 2007-07-06 15:17:29 Post subject:

谁配的乐，又是谁朗诵的？太美了——使人忘忧并陶醉。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-07-06 19:36:44 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

谁配的乐，又是谁朗诵的？太美了——使人忘忧并陶醉。

一位叫叶雨的朋友帮着作的, 朗诵是谁我还真想不起名字 Embarassed

谢谢你喜欢

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Posted: 2007-08-21 00:34:58 Post subject:

很好的，学习了！ _________________ 爱出者爱返,福注者福来.

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Posted: 2007-08-21 10:51:10 Post subject:

朗诵好诗歌更好：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-08-21 15:57:38 Post subject:

石榴花开 wrote:

很好的，学习了！

问好, 希望多听的你的朗诵.

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Posted: 2007-08-21 15:59:19 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

朗诵好诗歌更好：）

。。

谢谢KOK.听的出是谁朗诵的吗?你认识的 Wink

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