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和白水 Moonlight《如梦令 古渡》
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PostPosted: 2007-07-31 01:45:21    Post subject: 和白水 Moonlight《如梦令 古渡》 Reply with quote
和白水 Moonlight《如梦令 古渡》

回首问君何处，
讶异出眸还雾。
山岙尚随追，
今日迟疑南浦。
狐步，
狐步，
梦里含情倾诉？


附注白水原词：

向晚夕阳归处
惊散青烟红雾
挚手忆当年，无奈重逢南浦
留步留步
了断痴情难诉
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PostPosted: 2007-07-31 04:16:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
风懒蝉鸣热处，昼夜多晴少雾。
偶有满天云，长是匆匆离去。
求雨，求雨，须等神仙会许。

小睡还惊望浦，不睡还愁田亩。
怜惜水中鱼，游向高原遇阻。
羞步，羞步，似觉苦蛙追诉。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-31 05:11:45    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好丢丢, 高原鱼.临屏草和, 见谅.

病卧南厢息处
寒热腾云颠雾
慢咽痛失声
只为吟诗修浦
晕步晕步
点墨鱼猫相诉
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PostPosted: 2007-07-31 17:40:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢二位。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-01 17:09:04    Post subject: Reply with quote
游向高原的鱼 wrote:
谢谢二位。


丈夫也！
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PostPosted: 2007-08-01 18:36:16    Post subject: Reply with quote
呵呵，几日下雨没怎么来，和词和得好热闹哦！ Razz 稍候，俺也献丑来一首 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-08-01 18:59:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
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呵呵，几日下雨没怎么来，和词和得好热闹哦！ Razz 稍候，俺也献丑来一首 Embarassed


MM加油. Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-08-01 19:05:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢GG Laughing 我这就发 Crying or Very sad
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PostPosted: 2007-08-01 19:08:50    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢 Very Happy
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